Deedra Feldmeier
Tuesday, August 9, 2011
What do you think to my 1st bit of my story?
Starting a story is always the hardest part. That being said, I like your intro. It flows nicely and I like the hook. I get the feeling that it's a 15 year old girl writing her first diary entry.
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